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Posted in Mystery Story with tags on June 12, 2009 by whatamystery

It was a warm sunny day in Yakima, Washington. Sally was getting ready to go to work at McDonalds as the cashier. She brushed her short thick hair. She envied her friend Jessica. She had a successful job, big blue eyes, a great boyfriend, and long silky blond hair. She thought of all the great things Jessica had as she quickly brushed her teeth. Oh, and she had forgotten, Jessica also had naturally white teeth as oppose to her, who had yellow crooked ones. She left her small messy bungalow that could barely fit what she needed. As she walked over to the McDonalds she worked at, she thought of how lucky Jessica was. Continue reading



Posted in Mystery Story with tags on June 10, 2009 by whatamystery

“Mama, where  are  we  going with  this  cruise  boat?” asked  12-year-old Melodie.
“We  are  going  to  the  United  States  of  America  to  visit  one  of  my  friends.” replied  Rebecca Stalman, Melodie’s  mother.
Melodie  and  Mrs.  Stalman  came  from  London, England. They’re  on  a  trip  going  to  the  U.S.A. Of  course  there  are  other  people  on  this  boat! The  day  she  got  on, Melodie  met  a  boy  around  the  same  age.
“Hello! greeted  the  boy. “My  name  is  Fred  Adams. How  about  you?”
“Nice  to  meet  you,  Fred. I  am  Melodie  Stalman,” replied  Melodie.
“What  are  you  doing  on  this  boat?” asked  Fred. Continue reading